Re: [PATCH 1/2] dt-bindings: reserved-memory: document Qualcomm MPSS DSM memory

[Krzysztof Kozlowski]

On 16/11/2022 11:16, Neil Armstrong wrote:
> This documents the Qualcomm Modem Processing SubSystem DSM shared memory.

Do not use "This commit/patch".
https://elixir.bootlin.com/linux/v5.17.1/source/Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst#L95

> 
> Signed-off-by: Neil Armstrong <neil.armstrong@xxxxxxxxxx>
> ---
>  .../reserved-memory/qcom,mpss-dsm-mem.yaml         | 37 ++++++++++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 37 insertions(+)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/reserved-memory/qcom,mpss-dsm-mem.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/reserved-memory/qcom,mpss-dsm-mem.yaml
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..65f37e1356d4
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/reserved-memory/qcom,mpss-dsm-mem.yaml
> @@ -0,0 +1,37 @@
> +# SPDX-License-Identifier: (GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause)
> +%YAML 1.2
> +---
> +$id: "http://devicetree.org/schemas/reserved-memory/qcom,mpss-dsm-mem.yaml#";
> +$schema: "http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#";

Drop quotes from above.

I know that this and few further pieces came from existing files...

> +
> +title: Qualcomm Modem Processing SubSystem DSM Memory
> +
> +description: |
> +  This binding describes the Qualcomm Modem Processing SubSystem DSM, which serves the

Drop "This binding describes"

> +  purpose of describing the shared memory region used for MPSS remote processors.

Entire description seems like not wrapped at 80.

> +
> +maintainers:
> +  - Bjorn Andersson <bjorn.andersson@xxxxxxxxxx>

Need to update the address.

> +
> +allOf:
> +  - $ref: "reserved-memory.yaml"

Drop quotes.

> +
> +properties:
> +  compatible:
> +    const: qcom,mpss-dsm-mem

Why do we need dedicated binding and compatible for it instead of using
memory-region phandle in the device?

> +
> +unevaluatedProperties: false


Best regards,
Krzysztof